Nice first chapter, it feels like a DnD campaign with a great focus on the characters, their party interactions, some history on RENFAER, and SIMNEL and a few of their motives as they find the treasure. The art is amazing detailed of the taverns, towns, and forests and clean character art (SIMNEL's claws are my favorite). Only thing I would say is a negative is it takes some getting used to the character's lingo. But all and all this is a solid first chapter.
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Nice first chapter, it feels like a DnD campaign with a great focus on the characters, their party interactions, some history on RENFAER, and SIMNEL and a few of their motives as they find the treasure. The art is amazing detailed of the taverns, towns, and forests and clean character art (SIMNEL's claws are my favorite). Only thing I would say is a negative is it takes some getting used to the character's lingo. But all and all this is a solid first chapter.
So glad you enjoyed the first chapter! We're hard at work on the rest.